Saturday, March 27, 2010

A Picture is Worth 55 Words














Monday: Sleep in for ten minutes; later wake up happily,
Tuesday: Take several tests I’m certain of failing epically,
Wednesday: Find ways to get ten dollars quickly,
Thursday: See ­Rent (great, spectacular, amazing-absolutely!),
Battle between bad luck and me
I had won, just barely,
But, this week, victory!
Next week we’ll,
Have to,
See.

5 comments:

  1. Denise! A great poem. Very cute and clever. Have a great weekend!

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  2. Denise, this was a great poem. I liked the way you explained what happened each day. I thought that was an awesome idea. I'm sure you won't fail any of those tests. Also it was a nice idea of the battle between you and your luck. I'm glad you won. Overall, very good poem.

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  3. Denise, this was terrific. You are very clever and creative. This was a cute poem and like Tyler and Mrs. Collentine have already said, very interesting approach to the assignment and I am very happy that you won!

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  4. Denise, this poem is really good! I really liked how a lot of it rhymed, and just like Tyler said, I liked how you explained each day. You did a great job on your poem!

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  5. Denise, your poem was great! You really got creative in writing down the days of the week in poem, and making each line rhyme. Your way of setting up your poem was very unique. Nice poem and cute picture!

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